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WARNING TO THOSE WHO ARE ABOUT TO READ THIS STORY. ITS DARK ITS ABOUT DEATH AND IF YOU CANT HANDLE DEATH VERY WELL I DONT THINK IT WOULD BE WISE TO READ IT.
PLEASE READ IT AND GIVE ME COMMENTS. POSTIVE ONES ONLY PLEASE NO NEGATIVES I DONT NEED DRAMA FROM MY WRITING. MY WRITING GIVES ME FREEDOM TO EXPRESS MY DARK AND LIGHTER SIDE DEPENDING ON WHAT I AM FEELING.
ENJOY THE STORY.




a blade that looks so smooth, So velvet. It shimmers in the dark. It moves like a razor in the air, Cuting through the empty space as fast as you can go. Reality doesnt sink or start to show unitl you see the warm red liquid dripping from that blade. You look over and start to panic. you suddenly realize what you just did. You sliced open

someone you loved. They lay on the floor motionless. their last movements trying to stay up and breath but no air would fill their lungs because what once not there blood flows freely down their body and all over the floor.
You think for a momment on what to do. Then you realize you still holding the blade. You quickly drop it. Your hands are shaking. You make a attempt to move toward the phone. Your feet dont follow orders. You think : Am I stuck in this situation forever? its this what helll will be like? I killed them! How could I kill them? Why cant I move my feet? What the hell is wrong with me?
You shut your eyes and clear your thoughts. You think about walking across the room. You see your foot lifting to take a step and the other one following behind. You keep thinking this and seeing it till finally you take your frist tiny baby step. Then you take another step. As you continue you get closer to the door. Until finally you touch the door knob. you go to look backwards and stop yourself. You think : I cant look back now or I wont leave. I must get outta here! I am so afarid!!!!
Your slowly opens the door. You feel the knob turn slowly. It feels as if everything is in slow motion. The door finally opens and you step through the doorway and closed the door quickly,As if your hiding something. You know your hiding something. You cant let others see it. Your so ashamed of yourself. You cant believe that the impossible has happened. You close your eyes again and take a deep breath. You realize once your eyes are opened that everything is dark,and very cold. Where am I? you think.....I was just at home. I just walked through a door to the bathroom. How could I be in this cold space with no lights.
You lay there freaked,and very scared. Unsure of what is going to happen next. Suddenly you hear talking and you cant believe what your hearing......:
Hey Stew, You ready to look at that stiff that came in yesterday?"
"Tell you the truth Sam, This one gives me the willies. I have a daughter her age. I cant believe this happened to such a sweet sweet girl. She went to school with my son for a few grades very quiet and respectful. What types of things happen to where young adults flip out and just end their lives like this?"
"Stew you gotta get over this man. She was a nice girl. That girl is gone. all thats left is her flesh. Her soul has moved on. I know its hard that shes so young but still its our job to dress her and clean her up and get her ready for her last big day. Her family is counting on us to get this done before 2pm tommorrow."
"Alright Sam, Your right lets get this done so we can go home to our families and I dont have to think about this again for a long long long time....."
Suddenly the darkness has light shed into it. You feel the warm air hit your toes. But you cant move your toes. You cant move your hands either. For Godsakes you cant even sit up when you see the outline of the room. What happened to me? Where am I? What are these people doing putting plugs in my viens? I am so afarid why cant I talk to someone now??? Your thoughts keep speeding but suddenly stop as you feel your blood start to be pulled away. where was it going you didnt know but the feeling felt so strange you just continue to lay there not knowing whats going to happen next.
Suddenly you jolt alert and you hear a bunch of sobbing. Why is everyone crying? Why arent they saying anything to me? Are they just ignoring me? am I invisable to the rest of the world or what? suddenly you see your pastor and Mom walk up where your laying. Your Mom lays a red rose between your hands. Kisses your cheek. You feel a tear hit your face. She mumbles love you and you will be missed kiddo. and then slowly backs away and cries. you then finally realize what had happened to you. YOU ARE DEAD. IT WAS NOT A DREAM YOU SLICED AND DICED YOUR WRISTS TILL THERE WAS NO THING LEFT. YOU THOUGHT IT WAS A DREAM. BUT THIS DREAM BECAME A NIGHTMARE AND THIS NIGHTMARE BECAME REAL. TAKE HEED WITH WHAT YOU DO YOU CAN CHANGE YOUR WHOLE DESTINY IN ONE BLIND OF A BLINDED EYE.
~The End~